Friday, May 29, 2009

And ultimately, HE surrendered........

What kind of stabbing commotion it was?

This was the first time when HE refrained from HIS meditation so early. It was a matter of just thousand years & HE capitulated to this clamor. HE, the Almighty, who used to meditate for billions of years never felt so vulnerable.
HE had a glance on earth & got petrified with this direful view of HIS creation. Blood-bath, abhorrence, atrocity, trepidation were omnipresent, probably more than HIM.
These were not consequences of any world-war or power-struggle or covetousness but were consequences of fight of conviction. Hindu, Muslim, Christian were no more same as He made them & written in their hap.

He hastily called up Ram, Jesus & Mohammad to confer about the situation.
Almighty said, `` what you have done with this human? I planned for three messengers & three trails leading to a single destiny; because I comprehend that they are not like-minded & need different elucidation. But, they exploited themselves in proving their path rather than following it. You know, I was feeling so complacent with my creation that was thinking of making one more earth by epitomizing this one. But now, I need to rethink on that & have to find a solution too for this existing one, what do you say? ``
Trinity spoke coherently, `` hey Almighty, this earth is undeniably an epitome of your vastly ingenious creation, you should perceptibly make one more, but we importune you to make it religion-less. ``

All of a sudden, kabira appeared having a trail of tears on his face.
He beseeched , `` Hey God, I embraced everyone without asking about his religion, endeavored to edify them with lesson of humanity & love, pursued them to think above religion & see how Hindus & Muslims are still fighting for my dead body.``
All had a look on earth & got blue with that nerve-racking sight.
Kabira said again, `` I implore you to obliterate this earth & this human-being. ``
HIS face that was more splendid than thousands of suns turned into a murky night with this plead of Kabira.
HE said, `` How can I do that? Do you know extent of my love with this earth & human being? Trinity, do you think wreckage is the only way out? ``
Trinity spoke, `` God, we can’t find a single scope of revamp & end is the only thing we can think of. According to us, termination done by you would be far auspicious than done by hatred & arrogance. You have to go for it.``
Devastating own creation is not a painless task for anyone, so was not for HIM.

But, HE was feeling so feeble in impeding this massacre that had to take the verdict. HE limped, quivered, blubbered and ultimately, hammered it.


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